My year-long odyssey into the various styles of poetry has taught me many lessons about myself. I enjoy getting lost in the world of rhyming words. There still isn’t one style of poetry I would choose as my favorite to write in. July is the perfect month to create a selection of free verse poems. This style of poetry has no rules, which I find liberating. They don’t have to rhythm, but I suspect mine will rhythm because that is how I roll. One of the poems I plan to share during this month of free verse is Sharp Eyed Women.
Sharp Eyed Women
When I was young
I thought my Momma had superpowers
Omnipotent and omnipresent
Able to leap small buildings
With a single effortless bound.
X-ray vision to see through brick walls
And eavesdrop on conversations
Whispered a mile away.
I speculated
Her hearing aide was
a secret listening device
As efficient as an F.B.I. wiretap.
Because her clever clairvoyance invaded
All my childhood pranks.
Like when I stole pieces of penny candy,
From Jessie Weaver’s grocery store,
Or when we tortured Billy Piout,
The four-eyed pirate,
Convincing him, we were Martians,
Come to take over planet earth.
Threatening him with evaporation
If he exposed our evil plan.
And all the while,
She washed dishes,
Over at the Casa Granda
Cleaning pots and pans,
To make the welfare check
Stretch far enough so we could eat
And maybe afford a pair of Goodwill shoes.
When I was grown,
With kids of my own,
She told me her secret.
On warm summer evenings
After dinner and the dishes
Her army of secret informants
Delivered their intelligence reports
Over the backyard fence.
Momma had her spies.
A whole network of secret agents
More intelligent than the C.I.A.
Penetrating sharp eyed women eyes
Peaking from behind curtained windows
From the coolness of front porch swings
Behind the counter over at Jessie Weaver’s
The women watchers
Who knew who belonged to who,
And could put a face with a name.
These days I hear
It takes a village to raise a child.
A village filled with sharp eyed women
To put a face with a name.
These days there is no village
All the women have gone to work
In the offices and the factories
Behind the counters at the fast-food joints.
Chasing after the elusive American dream
With no one home but the children
With television as a babysitter
And a cellphone to tell them what to believe
Staying behind four walls out of fear.
And we adults wonder why
They have no morals
And shoot at one another in the street.
We need a village of sharp eyed women,
To sit on front porch swings
A silent network of secret informers
More intelligent than the C.I.A.
Who knows who belongs to who
And can put a face to a name.
With tongues as sharp as sabers,
And hands as strong as steel.
Their hearts as soft as goose down,
And wills as firm as flint.
Give me an army of sharp eyed women,
And I’ll turn this village around.
Who is Molly Shea?
Molly Shea is an accomplished fictional short story writer from Indiana who writes short stories and novels about a fictional town called Tecumseh. To read more of her short stories and adventures, click here.
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this gave me chills and is so very good – the momma spies were everywhere and it kept us all going
Thank you for reading.
I love this!!!
Thank you for reading.
“…free verse poems. This style of poetry has no rules, which I find liberating” – I love this style too!! I read you’ve rolled with a natural flow like a wonderful waterfall. And gives memories of mum when I was younger 🥰
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