I am happy March has arrived, and I can put my adventure with the Aquarian metered poetry behind me. I’ve decided to move into new territory. In the past, I have devoted myself to writing a single style of poetry for the month. Writing in the same style for thirty days can get tiring, so I will lunch a new way of attacking my poetic journey. I will explore three new types of poetry in March, and I plan to write Breccbairdne, Blackout, and Brady’s Touch poems. This poetic adventure will teach me many important lessons about meter and rhythm. Let’s get started. This poem is a Black Out Poem titled Relaunch.
Blank Out Poem and Relaunch
Poet takes a black marker and redacts words until a poem is formed. It is important to note the text and redacted words form a visual poem.
Method to use
!. Identify source text. The source can be a newspaper, a page from a book, or any written text.
2. Draw a box around keywords or phrases.
3. Make Connections between boxes. (This is optional.)
4. Color the rest in with a marker. You can use any color. The most common color used is black.
I found this style of creating a poem unique from anything I’ve ever tried before. The words are already provided, and the challenge is to make something poetic out of the text. I decided to use Mr. Chartwell, Rebecca Hunt, to create these poems.
Note: Hunt uses several references to the Babylonian Whore in the book I am using to create these poems. Possible from one of two references. In the book of Revelation, the whore of Babylon exists. I also discovered that in the Victorian Age, the city of London was nicknamed Babylon. Since Hunt is an English writer, I assume the reference comes from and is used similar to the David Gray song Babylon.
Relaunch That maddening numbfish Disturbed him. His radar identified A strange energy. The sky of her face, Unaware, From her chair. Two Cavalry Officers Raised a strict arm. His back to the viewer, Seeing him, Looking away from her. Unusual thoughts He chastised himself. His mental focus Aggressively approached, His reluctant mood. For a few silent moments, resolving He had the words. She typed out a string of nonsense. “I’m so sorry.” “No matter. We shall relaunch.” That maddening numbfish Disturbed him. His radar identified A strange energy. The sky of her face, Unaware, From her chair. Two Cavalry Officers Raised a strict arm. His back to the viewer, Seeing him, Looking away from her. Unusual thoughts He chastised himself. His mental focus Aggressively approached, His reluctant mood. For a few silent moments, resolving He had the words. She typed out a string of nonsense. “I’m so sorry.” “No matter. We shall relaunch.”
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