A One-Man Circus

I have a confession to make. The Black Out Poem has captured my imagination. I find it interesting to take a page filled with writing and turn it into something often contrary to the original meaning. It’s like playing with someone else’s words and making them become my own. Free verse is the best way to work with this form of poetry. There are many pages of the book I selected left. I’m going by the old cliché “waste not, want not.” I plan to use  Rebecca Hunt’s Mr. Chartwell until it runs out of words to create Black Out verses. The poem I called A One-Man Circus .

About the Black Out Poem and A One-Man Circus

Poet takes a black marker and redacts words until a poem is formed. It is important to note the text and redacted words form a visual poem.

Method to use

1. Identify source text. The source can be a newspaper, a book page, or written text.

2. Draw a box around keywords or phrases.

3. Make Connections between boxes. (This is optional.)

4. Color the rest in with a marker. You can use any color. The most common color used is black.

I found this style of creating a poem unique from anything I’ve ever tried before. The words are already provided, and the challenge is to make something poetic out of the text. I decided to use Mr. Chartwell by Rebecca Hunt to create these poems.

A One-Man Circus

Thick peaks
A bulbous glass vase
With dimpled bronze
An artistic and flattering
Tasselled white blanket
Shade hung low
An empty bottle
Past the open French doors
Thumping steps
There as a joke
A giant adult
Always loud
The build of a boxer
Muscle had softened
Bear-fed bear
Two dark creases
Sullen psychic conversation
Beautiful
A one-man circus

Who is Molly Shea?

Molly Shea is an accomplished fictional short story writer from Indiana who writes short stories and novels about a fictional town called Tecumseh.  To read more of her short stories and adventures, click here.

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I am the author of Saving the Hen House. I didn't know when I started it would turn into a series. I love to ride motorcycles, the blues, my family, and going on adventures. This old hen rocks.

2 thoughts on “A One-Man Circus

  1. Yes, sometimes the arguments in my head sound like that too. “two dark creases, sullen psychic conversation…” It is a one-man circus indeed.

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