I have a confession to make. The Black Out Poem has captured my imagination. I find it interesting to take a page filled with writing and turn it into something often contrary to the original meaning. It’s like playing with someone else’s words and making them become my own. Free verse is the best way to work with this form of poetry. There are many pages of the book I selected left. I’m going by the old cliché “waste not, want not.” I plan to use Rebecca Hunt’s Mr. Chartwell until it runs out of words to create Black Out verses. The poem I called Complicated Feelings.
About the Black Out Poem and Complicated Feelings
Poet takes a black marker and redacts words until a poem is formed. It is important to note the text and redacted words form a visual poem.
Method to use
1. Identify source text. The source can be a newspaper, a book page, or written text.
2. Draw a box around keywords or phrases.
3. Make Connections between boxes. (This is optional.)
4. Color the rest in with a marker. You can use any color. The most common color used is black.
I found this style of creating a poem unique from anything I’ve ever tried before. The words are already provided, and the challenge is to make something poetic out of the text. I decided to use Mr. Chartwell by Rebecca Hunt to create these poems.
Complicated Feelings “Accepted it.” A clear statement Conversation terminated A thought stopped Express it sensitively Fine and poised Immaculate Handsome Shook her hand free “This isn’t the last time I acknowledge you. It always has been You simply didn’t exist. One final point You don’t intimidate,” Shouldered the burden A brave choice Still achieving A smile from the freezer Thick with complicated feelings Never surrendered. He left.
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5 thoughts on “Complicated Feelings”
A lot of emotion in this one. Love it, Molly 🙂💕
Love this one Molly!