I have a confession to make. The Black Out Poem has captured my imagination. I find it interesting to take a page filled with writing and turn it into something often contrary to the original meaning. It’s like playing with someone else’s words and making them become my own. Free verse is the best way to write this form of poetry. I ran out of pages in Rebecca Hunt’s Mr. Chartwell. I decided to step things up in my adventure with black-out poetry.
Before I retired, I worked in a small university police office. Part of my duties centered around processing the lost and found. At the end of each semester, students often left books on table tops they couldn’t sell back to the bookstore. We kept them for a long time before placing them in the trash. I brought Carol S. Dweck’s Mindset home because it caught my attention. This poem I created from my rescued book is titled Pay Attention.
About the Black Out Poem and Pay Attention
Poet takes a black marker and redacts words until a poem is formed. It is important to note the text and redacted words form a visual poem.
Method to use
1. Identify source text. The source can be a newspaper, a book page, or written text.
2. Draw a box around keywords or phrases.
3. Make Connections between boxes. (This is optional.)
4. Color the rest in with a marker. You can use any color. The most common color used is black.
I found this style of creating a poem unique from anything I’ve ever tried before. The words are already provided, and the challenge is to make something poetic out of the text. I’m excited to see how the different textbook writing style found in Carol S. Dweck’s Mindset translates into poetic form.
Pay Attention The meeting place Down the block Yelling, “Wait for me.” Frozen, clutching the coins My hand What didn’t I Top them I accept defeat Some simple tasks Perform magical Or superhuman feats Ordinary thing Bright seemingly Resourceful Paralyzed by setbacks Make things better When things go wrong Powerless and incapable Something promising Slipping away Change isn’t like surgery A worn-out New belief Become stronger Beliefs are the key to happiness Suddenly realized Something quickly flashed Negative feelings Pay attention and hear
Who is Molly Shea?
Molly Shea is an accomplished fictional short story writer from Indiana who writes short stories and novels about a fictional town called Tecumseh. To read more of her short stories and adventures, click here.
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5 thoughts on “Pay Attention”
Love this, Molly 💕🙂
“Change isn’t like surgery”. Love that line. We’d like it to be quick and just cut it off, but it is never like that.
It always takes time and effort to change.