Dynasty

I have a confession to make. The Black Out Poem has captured my imagination. I find it interesting to take a page filled with writing and turn it into something often contrary to the original meaning. It’s like playing with someone else’s words and making them become my own. Free verse is the best way to write this form of poetry. I ran out of pages in Rebecca Hunt’s Mr. Chartwell. I decided to step things up in my adventure with black-out poetry.

Before I retired, I worked in a small university police office. Part of my duties centered around processing the lost and found. At the end of each semester, students often left books on table tops they couldn’t sell back to the bookstore. We kept them for a long time before placing them in the trash. I brought Carol S. Dweck’s Mindset home because it caught my attention. This poem I created from my rescued book is titled Dynasty.

About the Black Out poem Dynasty

Poet takes a black marker and redacts words until a poem is formed. It is important to note the text and redacted words form a visual poem.

Method to use

1. Identify source text. The source can be a newspaper, a book page, or written text.

2. Draw a box around keywords or phrases.

3. Make Connections between boxes. (This is optional.)

4. Color the rest with a marker. You can use any color. The most common color used is black.

I found this style of creating a poem unique from anything I’ve ever tried before. The words are already provided, and the challenge is to make something poetic out of the text. I’m excited to see how the different textbook writing style found in Carol S. Dweck’s Mindset translates into poetic form.

Dynasty

Fantasizing about
The mistakes of
Firmly believed
Fixed ability
Ability not allowed
Mistakes
Question
In any way
That would reflect
Motivational strategies
Weren’t working

Incentive aside
Ridicule or humiliate
Complicated 
Profound ambivalence
I wanted 
To hug him
Tell him I loved him
Unqualified success

For all seasons
Produced
Undefeated
Winning streak
What I didn’t know
It was a far cry
From a
Dynasty

Who is Molly Shea?

Molly Shea is an accomplished fictional short story writer from Indiana who writes short stories and novels about a fictional town called Tecumseh.  To read more of her short stories and adventures, click here.

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I am the author of Saving the Hen House. I didn't know when I started it would turn into a series. I love to ride motorcycles, the blues, my family, and going on adventures. This old hen rocks.

One thought on “Dynasty

  1. You’ve been experimenting with black out poetry for a while, Molly, and I’m so glad it speaks to you. It’s a fascinating way to compose poetry, and you’ve inspired me to give it a try. I enjoyed the progression in this one. Well done.

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