Born Without Rhythm

Udit Bhatia invented cascade poetry in 2007. This relatively new style of poetry got its name because it should flow down the page in a waterfall effect. The poem’s structure is simple and relies on the refrain to create the cascading rhythm. The magic of these poems centers around the refrain. The unmetered poems vary in theme depending on the poet’s desire. The only rule used when writing a cascade is that all the lines in the first paragraph are repeated at the ends of every stanza that follows. I will call this cascade poem Born Without Rhythm.

Structure of a cascade poem and Born Without Rhythm

The lines are represented as ABC.

  1. The first line ends with line A.
  2. The second line ends with Line B.
  3. The third line ends with line C.

I had written this form of poetry before and had fun with it. I plan to start the month of March using this style. The length of the stanza can vary. There is no rule about sticking to three lines. The thing to remember is that the longer the stanza, the more complicated the poem.

Born Without Rhythm

I would give anything for a little musical ability
To play cool jazz like Coltrane
A blues guitar like B.B. King
Sing notes like Etta James
Finger the piano like Mozart
Sadly, I was born without any rhythm.

To my soul, it is a major disability
I watch people shutter in pain.
Every time I try to pluck a string.
I don’t even attempt to sing
Because they might attempt an assassination
I would give anything for a little musical ability

I’ve tried many times in vain
All of that practicing gets to me
I could never achieve a melodious sound
And people didn’t want me around
Blowing on an old clarinet, I found
In a trash can in a dark alleyway, trying
To play cool jazz like Coltrane

Next, I attempted to pluck a string
My small hands tried to tune
The guitar I was given with the busted front
It was hard to hold for a little runt
I knew I wouldn’t ever hold
A blues guitar like B.B. King

I scrolled through so many famous names
Of women who could sing with voices like angels
My biggest problem was I was never able
For my stupid voice to remain on key
It refused to behave itself and
 Sing notes like Etta James

I fear I lost favor with the muse of musical art
Every time my fingers touched a piano
I couldn’t control the direction they decided to go
They had a mind of their own
And now that I’ve grown, I can never
Finger the piano like Mozart

I think it is more or less a given
Musical ability escaped me
Even though I want to break free
And create a sound so unique
Nobody would guess I was a musical freak.
Sadly, I was born without any rhythm

Who is Molly Shea?

Molly Shea is an accomplished fictional short story writer from Indiana who writes short stories and novels about a fictional town called Tecumseh.  To read more of her short stories and adventures, click here.

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I am the author of Saving the Hen House. I didn't know when I started it would turn into a series. I love to ride motorcycles, the blues, my family, and going on adventures. This old hen rocks.

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