Hooray! Spring is officially here. I’ve started to see flowers poking their way from the ground. The scenery is greening, and the trees won’t be naked for long. I decided to start the month of April writing Diminished Hexaverse poems. I’ve never attempted this style, but it could be an exciting adventure in meter and word placement. It would be helpful if my muse made an appearance. I’ve heard rumors that he was booked in the delinquent muse jail on a DWI charge. I look forward to the challenge of writing in this style during April. We need to have a long talk if he ever makes bail. I call this poem Carousel in the Rain.
Diminished Hexaverse and Carousel in the Rain
What is a Diminished Hexaversa poem? I’ve read several definitions of what makes up one of these poems. The easiest way to explain the process is as follows.
- The poem typically consists of five stanzas
- Five lines = stanza one
- Four lines = stanza two
- Three lines= stanza three
- Two lines = stanza four
- One line = stanza five
- This form might have more than five stanzas.
- The syllables correspond to the number of lines in the stanza.
It sounds like a simple form of poetry, but things could get complex.
Carousel in the Rain Someday I want To ride on a Carousel in the Rain like Phoebe In the very last act Of “The Catcher In the Rye” and Feel like A kid again Riding on Bright painted Ponies and Watch the Raindrops Fall
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I like this poem that goes ’round like a carousel and also falls like rain.
Thank you.
Great poem Molly!
Thank you.