It’s true, I decided to switch things up a bit in August. I will continue to write Golden Shovel but move on to Robert Frost. Frost dropped out of college twice but earned more than 40 honorary degrees. That is the smart way to go to college, but he had to win four Pulitzer Prizes for poetry to accomplish the task. He read a poem at JFK’s presidential inauguration. I switched gears in August. Robert Frost is my new poet guy because he has a way with words. Therefore, this new poem will be titled The Neighbor.
Terrance Hayes invented the Golden Shovel style of poetry. This form of found poetry allows the writer to take a favorite poem and use it to make something original. I experimented with found poetry last year when I wrote Blank Verse poems. In the month of July, I focused on William Blake’s poems. Blake and I are breaking up.
The rules for writing a Golden Shovel Poem and The Neighbor
While researching this style of poetry created by Terrance Hayes, there seem to be four simple rules. You can use as many lines of the poem as you want, and the poem will end with you being your creation. I find this idea interesting. Written below are the three simple rules.
1). Choose a poem that you like. I currently I will use poems by Robert Frost.
2)Use each word in the line or lines as the end word in your poem. Make sure they stay in order.
3) Construct an entire poem around them. The meaning doesn’t have to be the same.
4) Give the original poet credit who wrote the line or lines you used.
In this poetic adventure, I will use poems written by Robert Frost. This small poem I call The Neighbor The words at the end of the lines are taken from Robert Frost’s Mending Wall.
The Neighbor Every time I think that he Has stopped talking he only Starts up again and says Silly stuff, claiming it's all good And all the barriers and fences I construct for sanity’s sake, make Him start again, which is never good And I wish we weren’t neighbors. I saw the first bird of spring Sitting on the line, which is The normal place for birds, and the Boy aimed his slingshot, intending mischief And pulled it with all his might in The direction of the bird and me I stood silent and I Froze in silent wonder The thought struck me that if The rock hit the bird and I Then my neighbor has gossip he could Peddle about and put Words to my pain and a Innocent death, such a trifling notion A spectator sport for him to engage in A splendid pleasure would be his If that rock hit me square in the head
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This poem is a total winner on all counts. GREAT job!
Thank you.
Great poem Molly!
Thanks.